Nice! I would drop the sentence "Neon is a chemical element and an inert gas, which is a minor component of the Earth's atmosphere" from the neon FB post, and the comma after "director" is not necessary. Otherwise I think these LGTM:)
Joe On 3 December 2015 at 01:57, Michael Guss <[email protected]> wrote: > Hey everyone, > > Here are some ideas for social media tomorrow. Thanks again for reviewing! > > > EN:WP 3D Printing <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/3D_printing> > > Fb: From cars to spacecrafts, some Futurologists believe that 3D printing > signals the beginning of a third industrial revolution. > https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/3D_printing > > > t: 2014: A five-year-old girl became the first child in the UK to have a > prosthetic made with 3D printing technology. > http://buff.ly/1Ro8cpa > > t: Several authors speculate that 3D printing could aid in sustainable > development in the developing world. http://buff.ly/1Ro8cpa > > > EN:WP Neon Lighting <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Neon_lighting> > > Fb: On this day in 1910, neon lighting is first demonstrated by Georges > Claude. Neon is a chemical element and an inert gas, which is a minor > component of the Earth's atmosphere. Originally envisioned as a form of > lighting, it came be to heavily be heavily used in advertising and > promotion. > https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Neon_lighting > > t: On this day in 1910, neon lighting is first demonstrated by Georges > Claude at the Paris Motor Show. http://buff.ly/1lx3rgp > > t: Without the invention of neon lighting, the city of Las Vegas would not > exist. http://buff.ly/1lx3rgp > > PD: > https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Neon_lighting#/media/File:Modern_vegas_vic_souvenirs.JPG > > > > ENP:WP Playstation (console) > <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/PlayStation_(console)> > > t: On this day in 1994, the Playstation was first released in Japan. > > Fb: On this day in 1994, the Playstation was first released in Japan. It > was the first "computer entertainment platform" to ship 100 million units. > > EN:WP Jean-Luc Godard <https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jean-Luc_Godard> > > Fb: Born on this day in 1930, French director, Jean-Luc Godard, who is > oftened considered the most radical French filmmaker of the 1960s and > 1970s. He has inspired other directors including Martin Scorcese, Wong > Kar-wai, and Bernardo Bertolucci. > https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jean-Luc_Godard > > t: Born on this day in 1930, French director, Jean-Luc Godard, often > identified with the 1960s French "New Wave" film movement. > http://buff.ly/1PxwOwa > > > > > > > -- > Michael Guss > Research Analyst > Wikimediafoundation.org > [email protected] > > _______________________________________________ > Social-media mailing list > [email protected] > https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/social-media > > -- *Joe Sutherland* Communications Intern [remote] joesutherland.rocks | @jrbsu <http://twitter.com/jrbsu> | +44 (0) 7722 916 433
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