Thomas' article has an [unreliable source] tag; not sure if that'll be problem. It's pretty small. Otherwise all LGTM—I think "promoter of" is more standard wording.
--Ed On Mon, Oct 19, 2015 at 12:47 AM, James Alexander <[email protected]> wrote: > On Sun, Oct 18, 2015 at 9:27 PM, Jeff Elder <[email protected]> wrote: > >> Hoping to get some things scheduled if anyone is around to eyeball these. >> >> >> Tweet: >> Did you know? The marriage of Thomas Thynne of Longleat may have helped >> to inspire Shakespeare's Romeo and Juliet. http://buff.ly/1LZzul5 >> > > LGTM. [though I'm going to go edit that article after this... there are a > couple things bothering me about the wording and sourcing ;) ] > > >> Tweet: >> Find out what happens when a journalist edits Wikipedia in a famous >> Argentine opera house. http://buff.ly/1LZBWrN >> >> > LGTM (on a side note it might be nice to link the author's newspaper in > the signature area newspaper or his name to his articles in the paper/his > twitter or something... seems weird to have it completely unlinked.) > > Tweet: >> Elmer Stricklett is considered to have been the first baseball pitcher to >> master the spitball. http://buff.ly/1ZPFnW2 >> > > LGTM ( Yes, not everyone will know what a spitball is... that's the > point... I didn't but was now I do ... yes I now realize this is > different then what I said yesterday about the 'open era' of tennis ... I > would argue this is easier to find from the link then that was but ... for > the record I'm thinking about my biases!) > > Tweet: >> Valerie Bettis was the first modern dance choreographer to work with a >> major ballet company. http://buff.ly/1LZCWfr >> > > LGTM > > >> Facebook: >> Florence Violet McKenzie, Australia's first female electrical engineer >> and a lifelong promoter for technical education for women, helped to >> introduce women into the Australian military and taught Morse code to >> thousands of sailors free of charge. http://buff.ly/1OD3hAs >> > > "promoter for" or "Promoter of" ? It sounds better to me with 'of' but > every single person in comms (and most on this list I imagine) is better at > grammar then I am :). Otherwise LGTM > > > _______________________________________________ > Social-media mailing list > [email protected] > https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/social-media > > -- Ed Erhart Editorial Associate Wikimedia Foundation
_______________________________________________ Social-media mailing list [email protected] https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/social-media
