I prefer the second; the first sounds a little too promotional with the mention of ticket sales.
On Sunday, October 18, 2015, Jeff Elder <[email protected]> wrote: > The new Star Wars movie is trending on Twitter. Tickets go on sale Monday. > There's a detailed article page. Should we jump in? > > Facebook: > Wikipedians have assembled lots of information about @The Force Awakens, > the first live-action Star Wars film in 10 years. Tickets go on sale > Monday. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Star_Wars:_The_Force_Awakens > > Twitter: > Facebook: > Find out more about #TheForceAwakens, the first live-action @StarWars film > in 10 years. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Star_Wars:_The_Force_Awakens > > > Jeff Elder > Digital communications manager > Wikimedia Foundation > 704-650-4130 > @jeffelder <https://twitter.com/JeffElder> > @wikipedia <https://twitter.com/wikipedia> > The Wikimedia blog <https://blog.wikimedia.org/> > -- Michael Guss Research Analyst Wikimediafoundation.org [email protected]
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