@Pine, ah, missed that. ;-)
@Joe, can we make sure the image and caption are fixed when you share it on
Facebook? When I share the page, it shows the graveyard image and includes
the first image's caption, neither of which are very engaging. I like the
image with the crewman next to the bomb—it's a human face.

--Ed

On Wed, Aug 5, 2015 at 5:16 PM, Pine W <[email protected]> wrote:

> I added one word. (: "in"
>
> Pine
>
>
> On Wed, Aug 5, 2015 at 3:15 PM, Ed Erhart <[email protected]> wrote:
>
>> @Pine, that was my originally suggested edit. ;-) Thank you for the
>> comments!
>>
>> --Ed
>>
>> On Wed, Aug 5, 2015 at 5:08 PM, Pine W <[email protected]> wrote:
>>
>>> Perhaps "Unlike in The Hunt for Red October, this ship was sunk." ?
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Pine
>>>
>>>
>>> On Wed, Aug 5, 2015 at 3:06 PM, James Alexander <
>>> [email protected]> wrote:
>>>
>>>> I kinda like using the hunt for Red October since it reflects the title
>>>> of the blog post (The hunt for Tirpitz).
>>>>
>>>> James Alexander
>>>> Community Advocacy
>>>> Wikimedia Foundation
>>>> (415) 839-6885 x6716 @jamesofur
>>>>
>>>> On Wed, Aug 5, 2015 at 3:04 PM, Pine W <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>
>>>>> OK. Even so, I think the best comparison for the ship is Red October
>>>>> rather than the Hunt for Red October.
>>>>>
>>>>> Alternative:
>>>>>
>>>>> "Wikipedia and the hunt for a Nazi battleship"
>>>>>
>>>>> Pine
>>>>>
>>>>>
>>>>> On Wed, Aug 5, 2015 at 2:44 PM, Joe Sutherland <
>>>>> [email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>>> Alas, you can't italicise on social media.
>>>>>>
>>>>>> Joe
>>>>>>
>>>>>> On 5 August 2015 at 22:43, Pine W <[email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Nice blog post.
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Suggestion: "Unlike *Red October*, this ship was sunk"
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> Pine
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>> On Wed, Aug 5, 2015 at 11:27 AM, Ed Erhart <[email protected]>
>>>>>>> wrote:
>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> (+Nick)
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> I know I wrote this one, but I'd change "Unlike The Hunt for Red
>>>>>>>> October, this German battleship was sunk" -> "Unlike The Hunt for
>>>>>>>> Red October, this ship was sunk."
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> --Ed
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>> On Wed, Aug 5, 2015 at 12:45 PM, Joe Sutherland <
>>>>>>>> [email protected]> wrote:
>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Hey all,
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> We just published "The Hunt for Tirpitz" to the blog. URL:
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/08/05/the-hunt-for-tirpitz/
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Many thanks to Nick for this post.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> Below are some proposed social media messages. Please tweak as
>>>>>>>>> needed.
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> *Twitter (@wikipedia/@wikimedia):*
>>>>>>>>> • After the British sunk the German battleship Bismarck, they
>>>>>>>>> turned their attention to its sister ship.
>>>>>>>>> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/08/05/the-hunt-for-tirpitz/
>>>>>>>>> • Why did an Australian Wikipedian write about British attacks on
>>>>>>>>> a German battleship in Norway?
>>>>>>>>> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/08/05/the-hunt-for-tirpitz/
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> *Facebook/Google+:*
>>>>>>>>> • After the British sunk the German battleship Bismarck, they
>>>>>>>>> turned their attention to its sister ship.
>>>>>>>>> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/08/05/the-hunt-for-tirpitz/
>>>>>>>>> • The British Royal Navy targeted this German battleship in three
>>>>>>>>> separate operations but could not sink the heavily armored warship.
>>>>>>>>> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/08/05/the-hunt-for-tirpitz/
>>>>>>>>> • Why did an Australian Wikipedian write about British attacks on
>>>>>>>>> a German battleship in Norway?
>>>>>>>>> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/08/05/the-hunt-for-tirpitz/
>>>>>>>>> • Unlike The Hunt for Red October, this German battleship was
>>>>>>>>> sunk. https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/08/05/the-hunt-for-tirpitz/
>>>>>>>>>
>>>>>>>>> thanks,
>>>>>>>>> Joe
>>>>>>>>>
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