Awesome! thoughts in line

James Alexander
Community Advocacy
Wikimedia Foundation
(415) 839-6885 x6716 @jamesofur

On Thu, Jul 23, 2015 at 2:56 PM, Joe Sutherland <[email protected]>
wrote:

> Hey all,
>
> We just published "News on Wikipedia: New Horizons and Iran agreement" to
> the Wikimedia blog. URL:
>
> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/07/23/new-horizons-and-iran-agreement/
>
> We plan to send out five pieces of social for this story, spread through
> the next seven days (or thereabouts). Here are the five in roughly the
> order we should post (oldest to newest).
>
> Please do comment for tone.
>
> *Twitter:*
>
> • It's Pluto like you've never seen it before. #NewsOnWikipedia
>

LGTM - Possibly tag @NASANewHorizons?

• A historic agreement was signed on Iran's nuclear program last week.
> #NewsOnWikipedia
>
• Jules Bianchi's death stunned the world of Formula One last week.
> #NewsOnWikipedia
> • The United States and Cuba formally reopened diplomatic relations last
> week. #NewsOnWikipedia
>
• A bombing on the Turkish border last week killed 32. #NewsOnWikipedia
>

LGTM - Personally I prefer "Last week, a historic agreement was signed..."
rather then "A historic agreement ..... last week." for the first 3 but
that's mostly a style thing and so no pressure :)

*Facebook/G+:*
>
> • The best ever image of Pluto was taken by NASA's New Horizons probe last
> week. #NewsOnWikipedia
>

@New Horizons​ should link the official NASA page
<https://www.facebook.com/new.horizons1/timeline>, perhaps tag that?
Otherwise LGTM


> • China, France, Germany, Russia, the United Kingdom and the United
> States all signed a historic agreement on Iran's nuclear program last week.
> #NewsOnWikipedia
> • Jules Bianchi, an upcoming Formula One superstar, died in hospital last
> week following a crash in Japan nine months ago. He was 25. #NewsOnWikipedia
> • The United States and Cuba broke diplomatic ties in the Cold War. This
> week they restored them. #NewsOnWikipedia
> • A bombing, attributed to the so-called Islamic State, killed 32 people
> in the Turkish province of Suruç, ten kilometers from Kobanî in Syria.
> #NewsOnWikipedia
>
> best,
> Joe
>
>
LGTM
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