Hi Amir,

I've made some further edits to the article; thanks for pointing these out.

best,
Joe

On 8 July 2015 at 07:59, Amir E. Aharoni <[email protected]> wrote:

> Hi,
>
> Thanks for publishing.
>
> There are a bunch of little errors there, and it would be really nice to
> fix them:
>
> * "but also to interest other departments in the University" -> "but also
> to interest other departments in the University *in this*"
> * "I asked the Xhosa-speaking audience members what do they thought about
> the text" -> "I asked the Xhosa-speaking audience members *what did they
> think* about the text" or "I asked the Xhosa-speaking audience members *what
> do they think* about the text"
> * "This is a taste of the things to come, which Content Translation makes
> easier than ever. More content can be created in more languages with less
> effort." - something feels disconnected here. I'd rewrite it like this:
> "This is a taste of the things to come. With Content Translation, more
> content can be created in more languages with less effort."
>
>
> --
> Amir Elisha Aharoni‏ ። אָמִיר אֱלִישָׁע אַהֲרוֹנִי
> Language Engineering‏ ። הַנְדָּסָה לְשׁוֹנִית
> Wikimedia Foundation‏ ። קֶרֶן וִיקִימֶדְיָה
>
> 2015-07-08 7:58 GMT+03:00 Joe Sutherland <[email protected]>:
>
>> Hey all,
>>
>> We just published "Getting newcomers into Wikipedia with Content
>> Translation" to the blog. URL:
>>
>> https://blog.wikimedia.org/2015/07/07/new-wikipedia-translators/
>>
>> Many thanks to Amir and the language engineering team for drafting this
>> post.
>>
>> Below are some proposed social media messages. Please tweak as needed.
>>
>> *Twitter (@wikimedia):*
>>
>> • #ContentTranslation is changing the way people access and use
>> Wikipedia. (link)
>>
>> *NOTE: Possibly a mention of @WhatToTranslate?*
>>
>> *Facebook/Google+:*
>>
>> • The Content Translation tool is helping all speakers of African
>> languages to embrace modern technology to improve the online educational
>> content in their languages. (link)
>>
>> • Our Content Translation tool was released as a beta feature on all
>> Wikipedias this week, and has already been successfully field-tested in
>> South Africa. (link)
>>
>> thanks,
>> Joe
>>
>> --
>> *Joe Sutherland*
>> Communications Intern [remote]
>> m: +44 (0) 7722 916 433 | t: @jrbsu <http://twitter.com/jrbsu> | w:
>> JSutherland <https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/User:JSutherland_(WMF)>
>>
>


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