In the second one, "improved" -> "improve." In the third one, I don't think you don't need a comma.
Perhaps use #Wikipedia instead to try to draw in more people? Best, --Ed On Mon, Jun 1, 2015 at 5:49 PM, Michael Guss <[email protected]> wrote: > Hello everyone, > > It is June 1 (for a good portion of the world still, sorry getting this > out a bit late), which means today is the start of Wiki Loves Pride. > > This month of June is dedicated to Wiki Loves Pride 2015, a global > campaign to expand and improve LGBT-related content across several > Wikimedia projects. Read more about it here: > https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Wiki_Loves_Pride_2015 > > Thanks for reviewing! > > t: June kicksoff the second annual #WikiLovesPride! Help increase the > number of people and perspectives contributing to #LGBT info on @Wikipedia: > https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Wiki_Loves_Pride_2015 > > t: Today begins #WikiLovesPride 2015. Help improved #LGBT representation > on @Wikipedia: > https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Wiki_Loves_Pride_2015 > > t: Today begins the second annual #WikiLovesPride, led by @WikimediaLGBT. > Improve #LGBT representation on @Wikipedia: > https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Wiki_Loves_Pride_2015 > > Fb/g: June marks the second annual #WikiLovesPride, a month-long campaign > to increase the number of people and perspectives contributing to LGBT > information on Wikipedia. > https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Wiki_Loves_Pride_2015 > > > > > > -- > Michael Guss > Research Analyst > Wikimediafoundation.org > [email protected] > > _______________________________________________ > Social-media mailing list > [email protected] > https://lists.wikimedia.org/mailman/listinfo/social-media > >
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