On Tue, Sep 9, 2014 at 6:50 PM, Carlos Monterrey
<[email protected]> wrote:
> Hi all,
>
> Here is the proposed SM for today's blog post regarding the recent study
> Charting Diversity. Thanks for reviewing:
>
> Blog post:
> http://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/09/09/working-together-towards-diversity-in-wikipedia/
>
> SM calendar:
> https://meta.wikimedia.org/wiki/Social_media/Calendar#September_9
>
> Now available: Charting Diversity – Working together to diversify Wikipedia
>
> t: A new study identified potential factors that can have a positive effect
> on gender diversity on Wikipedia. Read
> more:http://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/09/09/working-together-towards-diversity-in-wikipedia/
>
I would use this one, streamlined as follows:

A new study identified factors that could have a positive effect on
Wikipedia's gender diversity. Read more:
https://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/09/09/working-together-towards-diversity-in-wikipedia/


> t: @wmde has already implemented initiatives to promote gender diversity on
> Wikipedia based on a new study. Read more:
> http://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/09/09/working-together-towards-diversity-in-wikipedia/
>
Avoid starting with "@", and link to their main account instead:

Based on this new study, @WikimediaDE has already implemented
initiatives to promote gender diversity on Wikipedia.


> f/g: "Charting Diversity deals with diversity and its importance to
> Wikipedia, documenting our current knowledge on the matter, setting out
> fields of action and concluding with a catalogue of measures to serve as
> motivation for our future work." A recent study lays out potential
> initiatives that can help gender diversity on Wikipedia. Read more on the
> results here.
> http://blog.wikimedia.org/2014/09/09/working-together-towards-diversity-in-wikipedia/
>
For clarity I would add single quotes around the title, otherwise fine:
 " 'Charting Diversity' deals with diversity and its importance to ..."

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