Hi,
below is an unofficial I18NDIR review of the draft,
performed by John Klensin (forwarded here with his permission).
Thanks to John for doing this review.
Regards,
Valery.
-Original Message-
From: John C Klensin [mailto:john-i...@jck.com]
Sent: Monday, December 26, 2022 9:53 PM
To: V
Valery,
Thanks. In skimming back through this, I noticed several typos
and evidence of editorial carelessness. The ones that might be
unclear are:
* In (3) "other local deviations and (claimed) translation
strategies" should have been "other local deviations and
(claimed) transition strategies"