Re: [Ubuntu-manual] Current state of the title page

2010-02-23 Thread Thorsten Wilms
On Tue, 2010-02-23 at 10:37 +1300, Benjamin Humphrey wrote: > What's the second edition for? We discussed that a while ago and it's in the spec: The initial release version (1.0) will not have that string. If a need arises to release an edited version during the Lucid cycle (1.1), it will be call

Re: [Ubuntu-manual] Current state of the title page

2010-02-22 Thread Luke-Jennings
Hi, I like it, I would change "second edition" with " the ubuntu manual team" and what does the green look like in ubuntu red? May be make the pattern brighter. Cheers Luke Jennings On Mon, 2010-02-22 at 22:07 +0100, Thorsten Wilms wrote: > Hi! > > PDF export: > https://wiki.ubuntu.com/ubuntu-

Re: [Ubuntu-manual] Current state of the title page

2010-02-22 Thread Benjamin Humphrey
Nice, looking good! Some thinking out loud ideas: I'm not so sure about the green. What's the second edition for? The author (The Ubuntu Manual Team) seems to be too close to the pattern Wait until the end of this week before making any more changes, there is going to be a big announcement soon

[Ubuntu-manual] Current state of the title page

2010-02-22 Thread Thorsten Wilms
Hi! PDF export: https://wiki.ubuntu.com/ubuntu-manual/Artwork?action=AttachFile&do=get&target=manual_cover_2010-02-22.pdf SVG from Launchpad: http://bazaar.launchpad.net/~t-w-/+junk/ubuntu_manual_cover/download/head:/manual_cover_thorwil-20100110123530-dpe99960rm9yr365-1/manual_cover.svg Will ne