Re: [TLS] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tls-ecdhe-psk-aead-03

2017-05-18 Thread Dan Romascanu
Hi Daniel, Thank you for your response, and for addressing my comment. Yes, the edits address my concern, this is exactly the kind of clarification text that IMO was missing. I suggest to publish the revised version as soon as you address all other comments. The document can be approved by the IES

Re: [TLS] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tls-ecdhe-psk-aead-03

2017-05-18 Thread Daniel Migault
Hi Dan, Thank you for your reviews and comments. I believe the following text provides more explanation on how the provided cipher suites are negotiated by TLS1.3 as well as why point codes defined in the document does not apply to TLS1.3. Feel free to let me know if that address your concern

[TLS] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tls-ecdhe-psk-aead-03

2017-05-15 Thread Dan Romascanu
Reviewer: Dan Romascanu Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For mo