[TLS] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-tls-esni-23

Reviewer: Adam Montville Review result: Ready Based on my review of this draft I would classify it as "ready" for publication, with some minor caveats that don’t fundamentally undermine its readiness.The draft defines a clear, well-specified mechanism for encrypting the ClientHello. It leverages e

[TLS] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-tls-oldversions-deprecate-09

Reviewer: Adam Montville Review result: Ready I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG