[spring] Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-spring-mpls-path-segment-07

2022-06-13 Thread Matthew Bocci via Datatracker
Reviewer: Matthew Bocci Review result: Has Issues The draft is generally clear and well written. Thanks! I have a few issues below that I think should be resolved before publication as an RFC. Minor Issues - Grammar and mis-placement of commas throughout, which makes the document har

[spring] Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-spring-mpls-path-segment-16

2023-11-15 Thread Matthew Bocci via Datatracker
Reviewer: Matthew Bocci Review result: Has Nits I have been selected as the Routing Area Directorate reviewer for draft-ietf-spring-mpls-path-segment-16. Summary --- The draft is mostly ready to progress subject to fixing a few minor comments/nits as listed below. Major Comments