Comments about Overlay OAM Drafts

2016-06-26 Thread Tal Mizrahi
Dear OOAM Authors, I have read the two OOAM drafts, and I have some comments. Please see below. Comments about draft-ooamdt-rtgwg-ooam-requirement: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ooamdt-rtgwg-ooam-requirement-00 A general question about the draft: does the draft define requirements for oper

RE: Comments about Overlay OAM Drafts

2016-06-26 Thread Tal Mizrahi
m another draft, and is not applicable to this document. Cheers, Tal. >-Original Message- >From: Nagendra Kumar Nainar (naikumar) [mailto:naiku...@cisco.com] >Sent: Sunday, June 26, 2016 5:16 PM >To: Tal Mizrahi; draft-ooamdt-rtgwg-oam-gap-analy...@tools.ietf.org; draft- &g

Inclusive language

2022-03-21 Thread Tal Mizrahi
Hi, The following sentence caught my attention in the RTGWG discussion about inclusive language in RFC5798 bis (https://datatracker.ietf.org/meeting/113/materials/slides-113-rtgwg-3-vrrp-5798bis-01): "Please don’t make alternate suggestions without detailed knowledge of both the VRRP protocol and

RtgDir Early review: draft-ietf-rtgwg-srv6-egress-protection

2023-08-02 Thread Tal Mizrahi
/en/group/rtg/RtgDir Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-srv6-egress-protection-11 Reviewer: Tal Mizrahi Review Date: August 2, 2023 Intended Status: Standards Track Summary: I have concerns about this document. It needs more work before being submitted to the IESG. Main comments: - Reading the document