AD review for draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement

2024-08-16 Thread James Guichard
Deat authors, Please find my comments for draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement (I have included line numbers from nits to help identify where in the document the comment is relevant): Please update references below. == Outdated reference: A later version (-13) exists of draft-i

RE: AD review for draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement

2024-08-16 Thread Linda Dunbar
Jim, Thank you very much for the detailed review and the comments. The resolutions to address your comments are inserted below. Please let us know any further actions are needed. Thanks, Linda From: James Guichard Sent: Friday, August 16, 2024 6:54 AM To: draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-state

I-D Action: draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement-40.txt

2024-08-16 Thread internet-drafts
Internet-Draft draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement-40.txt is now available. It is a work item of the Routing Area Working Group (RTGWG) WG of the IETF. Title: Dynamic Networks to Hybrid Cloud DCs: Problems and Mitigation Practices Authors: Linda Dunbar Andrew G. Malis

RE: AD review for draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement

2024-08-16 Thread Linda Dunbar
Jim, Revision to address your comments has been submitted: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statement/ Thank you very much, Linda From: Linda Dunbar Sent: Friday, August 16, 2024 11:08 AM To: James Guichard ; draft-ietf-rtgwg-net2cloud-problem-statem...@ietf.