Hi Xiao Min,
thank you for your constructive comments and help in improving the
document. I'll upload the new version shortly.
Regards,
Greg
On Thu, Feb 13, 2025 at 5:40 PM wrote:
> Hi Greg,
>
>
> Thank you for the prompt reply.
>
> I believe your proposed text changes have addressed all my com
Hi Greg,
Thank you for the prompt reply.
I believe your proposed text changes have addressed all my comments.
p.s. It seems the first OLD TEXT should be
"Figure 1 displays the
extension of VRRP [RFC9568] to bootstrap a tail of the p2mp BFD
session."
And there is one typo in the second NEW TEXT,
Hi Xiao Min,
thank you for your helpful suggestion to clarify the use of the extension
of the VRRP Advertisement packet defined in the draft. Please check
proposed updates, I hope these address your concern (I attached the diff
highlighting all updates):
OLD TEXT:
Figure 1 displays the
extens
Hi Greg,
Thank you for the note on the last open item.
Please see inline.
Original
From: GregMirsky
To: 肖敏10093570;
Cc: draft-ietf-rtgwg-vrrp-p2mp-...@ietf.org
;rtgwg@ietf.org ;
Date: 2025年02月13日 05:49
Subject: Re: Document Shepherd Review for draft-ietf-rtgwg-vrrp-p2mp-bfd
Hi Xiao Min,t
Hi Xiao Min,
thank you for your expedient response. I am glad that we are rapidly
converging. One more note below tagged GIM2>>.
Regards,
Greg
On Wed, Feb 12, 2025 at 2:02 AM wrote:
> Hi Greg,
>
>
> Thank you for addressing my comments.
>
> Please see my responses inline.
> Original
> *From: *G
Hi Greg,
Thank you for addressing my comments.
Please see my responses inline.
Original
From: GregMirsky
To: 肖敏10093570;
Cc: draft-ietf-rtgwg-vrrp-p2mp-...@ietf.org
;rtgwg@ietf.org ;
Date: 2025年02月11日 13:16
Subject: Re: Document Shepherd Review for draft-ietf-rtgwg-vrrp-p2mp-bfd
Hi Xi
Hi Xiao Min,
thank you for taking on shepherding the draft. Please find my notes below
tagged GIM>>. Attached, please find the diff highlighting updates applied
in the new working version of the draft.
Regards,
Greg
On Sat, Feb 8, 2025 at 1:27 AM wrote:
> Dear Authors,
>
>
> I did my shepherd r
Hi Xiao Min,
thank you for your thorough review and helpful comments. We'll work on
addressing them and send updates for your feedback.
Regards,
Greg
On Sat, Feb 8, 2025 at 1:27 AM wrote:
> Dear Authors,
>
>
> I did my shepherd review on this concise draft. Comments are as below.
>
>
> == Secti
