Re: WGLC for BFD Multipoint documents (last round)

2018-01-26 Thread Reshad Rahman (rrahman)
Hi Greg, Thank you for the prompt response. The changes look good. Some nits I may missed during my review and nits on new rev: * 3 Overview. s/Details of how head keeps track/Details of how heads keep track/ (or if singular “of how a head keeps track”) * 4.2 Session Model. References t

Re: WGLC for BFD Multipoint documents (last round)

2018-01-26 Thread Reshad Rahman (rrahman)
Hi Greg, The proposal below addresses some of the concerns. But I would also like to see some wording/procedure to protect the tail in the 2 cases mentioned. Regards, Reshad. From: Greg Mirsky Date: Thursday, January 25, 2018 at 6:06 PM To: Jeffrey Haas Cc: "Reshad Rahman (rrahman)" , "Carlos

Re: WGLC for BFD Multipoint documents (last round)

2018-01-26 Thread Greg Mirsky
Hi Reshad, et. al, thank you for your kind consideration of the update. I'm applied all the changes you've agreed to. Remaining are few nits I wanted to confirm with you and one update that is not editorial: In 4.13.1 . Recep