Reviewer: Harald Alvestrand
Review result: Ready with Issues
Review of draft-ietf-regext-launchphase-06
Summary: I suppose this is ready for the editing pass. Apologies for not
completing it before the telechat.
The document does not do a very good job of describing the overall
flow of the
Den 06. des. 2017 20:18, skrev Gould, James:
> Harald,
>
> Thank you for your review and feedback, below are my answers to your feedback.
>
Thanks for the quick response!
Deleting all below where you said "yes, we'll do that" and where I have
no further comment.
> 2.4
>
> Thi
On 9/13/21 12:57 PM, Jody Kolker wrote:
Thanks Harald for the detailed review of the document. Please see our comments
in line below.
Thanks again!
Jody Kolker
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From: Harald Alvestrand via Datatracker
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tsu/registry-epp-maintenance/blob/master/draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance.txt>).
If this version is fine for you, we will do the update on datatracker.
Best,
Tobias
On 13. Sep 2021, at 14:13, Harald Alvestrand <mailto:har...@alvestrand.no>> wrote:
On 9/13/21 12:57 PM, Jo
Reviewer: Harald Alvestrand
Review result: Almost Ready
I have reviewed this document as part of the ARTART review team.
Verdict: Almost ready
There are a few things that need better definitions to be comprehensible enough
for interoperable implementation. There is also one confusing formatting
