[regext] doc shepherd comments for draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance-14

2021-06-18 Thread James Galvin
As document shepherd I have reviewed: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance-14 and provided a shepherd writeup so it can be submitted to the IESG for publication. However, I note the following three editorial nits that the authors should correct before s

Re: [regext] doc shepherd comments for draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance-14

2021-06-18 Thread Tobias Sattler
Thank you, Jim. I have prepared a new version already and ready to do another update to address your points. If that doesn’t break the process. Please see my comments inline. > On 18. Jun 2021, at 22:14, James Galvin wrote: > > As document shepherd I have reviewed: > > https://datatracker.ie

Re: [regext] doc shepherd comments for draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance-14

2021-06-18 Thread James Galvin
Thanks for the quick response. One comment inline. On 18 Jun 2021, at 16:52, Tobias Sattler wrote: Thank you, Jim. I have prepared a new version already and ready to do another update to address your points. If that doesn’t break the process. Please see my comments inline. On 18. Jun 2

[regext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-epp-registry-maintenance-15.txt

2021-06-18 Thread internet-drafts
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Registration Protocols Extensions WG of the IETF. Title : Registry Maintenance Notifications for the Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP) Authors