Re: [regext] Document Shepherd Write Up of Login-Security

Hi Jim and all, comments inline On Tue, Sep 24, 2019 at 5:01 PM Gould, James wrote: > Joseph, > > > > Thank you for performing the document shepherd review and creating the > writeup. You brought up 2 points in your comments, that I provide thoughts > on below: > > > >1. Section 3.1 - the

Re: [regext] Document Shepherd Write Up of Login-Security

Joseph, See my feedback below. -- JG [cid:image001.png@01D255E2.EB933A30] James Gould Distinguished Engineer jgo...@verisign.com 703-948-3271 12061 Bluemont Way Reston, VA 20190 Verisign.com From: Joseph Yee Date: Wednesday, September 25, 2019 at 4:31 PM To: James

Re: [regext] New-AD review of draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-09

This remains quite incomplete: the last call comments have not been properly handled. In Sections 6.1, 6.2, 7.1.2, and all the 7.2.x you made changes in response to Adam’s AD review, but you tried to use the second of his suggested fixes. What you did do is flawed, as you have introduced a space