Re: [regext] Minor feedback on draft-ietf-regext-rfc7483bis-00

2020-06-11 Thread Jasdip Singh
une 11, 2020 2:01 PM To: regext@ietf.org<mailto:regext@ietf.org> Subject: [EXTERNAL] [regext] Minor feedback on draft-ietf-regext-rfc7483bis-00 Hello Scott. While doing the shepherd writeup, noted few minor things which may help polish the doc further. * 5.5: Add “The” to the "A

Re: [regext] Minor feedback on draft-ietf-regext-rfc7483bis-00

2020-06-11 Thread Hollenbeck, Scott
From: regext On Behalf Of Jasdip Singh Sent: Thursday, June 11, 2020 2:01 PM To: regext@ietf.org Subject: [EXTERNAL] [regext] Minor feedback on draft-ietf-regext-rfc7483bis-00 Hello Scott. While doing the shepherd writeup, noted few minor things which may help polish the doc further

[regext] Minor feedback on draft-ietf-regext-rfc7483bis-00

2020-06-11 Thread Jasdip Singh
Hello Scott. While doing the shepherd writeup, noted few minor things which may help polish the doc further. * 5.5: Add “The” to the "Autonomous System Number Object Class” section title to be consistent with others. * 1, 5, 5.4, 5.5, 7, 8: Looks like the [I-D.ietf-regext-rfc7482bis]