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> From: Valery Smyslov
> Sent: Wednesday, August 30, 2023 4:23 AM
> To: Hollenbeck, Scott ; a...@ietf.org
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> regext@ietf.org
> Subject: [EXTERNAL] RE: Artart last call review of draft-ietf-regext-rdap
HI Scott,
please see my comments (I trimmed those where we're in agreement).
> > 2. In Section 3.1.1. "farv1_session/login" and "farv1_session/logout"
> >are used without any explanation and reference (they are defined later in
> >the document).
>
> [SAH] Note the complete sentence: "For
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> From: Valery Smyslov via Datatracker
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> Subject: [EXTERNAL] Artart last call review of
> draft-ietf-regext-rdap-openi
Reviewer: Valery Smyslov
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned ART directorate reviewer for this document. These comments
were written primarily for the benefit of the ART area directors. Document
editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call
comments.
