HI Scott,
please see my comments (I trimmed those where we're in agreement).
> > 2. In Section 3.1.1. "farv1_session/login" and "farv1_session/logout"
> >are used without any explanation and reference (they are defined later in
> >the document).
>
> [SAH] Note the complete sentence: "For
Reviewer: Valery Smyslov
Review result: Ready with Nits
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Hi James,
thank you for clarification. I presume all these things are clear for those who
are familiar with EPP,
and probably most of potential readers of this document fall into this
category, but if you can add short
explanation for the others it would be great.
Regards,
Valery Smyslov
Reviewer: Valery Smyslov
Review result: Ready with Nits
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