Hi Benjamin,
Sorry that I forgot your email is text/plain.
Since we'v e already define "one or more elements" in each
, and element. So the following text
seems a little duplicated and will be removed. I add the text strikethrough and
you may not find that.
The , and elements contain the f
Hin Benjamin,
Thanks for your text. It looks good.
Regards,
Linlin
Linlin Zhou
From: Benjamin Kaduk
Date: 2018-11-13 03:40
To: Linlin Zhou
CC: regext-chairs; Pieter Vandepitte; iesg; regext; draft-ietf-regext-org
Subject: Re: [regext] Benjamin Kaduk's No Objection on
draft-ietf-regext-org-11:
Hi Linlin,
On Mon, Nov 12, 2018 at 11:15:24AM +0800, Linlin Zhou wrote:
> Dear Benjamin,
> James provided his suggestions and I'd like to include them in the updated
> text. I think this is the last issue we have and please see if these changes
> workable for you.
I think this looks good, thank
Hi Linlin,
On Mon, Nov 12, 2018 at 09:11:59AM +0800, Linlin Zhou wrote:
> Dear Benjamin,
> I have confirmed with others about this wording. Your understanding is right
> that "service message" means using the mechanism. So I suggest
> changing the text in section 4.3 like,
> The server operator
