Re: Feedback desired on reworked ch 1 progr. intro (now Python 3.x, Windows)

2009-11-01 Thread Alf P. Steinbach
* Rhodri James: Before we start, can I just say that I find Google Docs loathsome? On Sat, 31 Oct 2009 07:40:36 -, Alf P. Steinbach wrote: I hope this new version of ch 1 is, well, better, addresses some of the concerns raised? Section 1.1 needs serious work. Could you please expan

Re: Feedback desired on reworked ch 1 progr. intro (now Python 3.x, Windows)

2009-11-01 Thread Rhodri James
Before we start, can I just say that I find Google Docs loathsome? On Sat, 31 Oct 2009 07:40:36 -, Alf P. Steinbach wrote: I hope this new version of ch 1 is, well, better, addresses some of the concerns raised? Section 1.1 needs serious work. You have a very assertive writing styl

Feedback desired on reworked ch 1 progr. intro (now Python 3.x, Windows)

2009-10-31 Thread Alf P. Steinbach
Hi all! After my earlier feedback request a lot of you responded with constructive criticism and suggestions. As a result of that I've changed the text to be based on *Python 3.x* instead of 2.6+, and chapter 1 "Getting started" has grown from 9 pages to a whopping 11 pages! I would particu