Re: [doc] minor wording improvement in a couple of places

2020-09-07 Thread John Naylor
On Mon, Sep 7, 2020 at 6:30 AM Magnus Hagander wrote: > > On Mon, Sep 7, 2020 at 6:34 AM Ian Barwick > wrote: >>"..., which see for additional details." >> >> which strikes me as a bit odd. Suggested phrasing: >> >>"...; see this file for additional details." >> > > I agree this sounds v

Re: [doc] minor wording improvement in a couple of places

2020-09-07 Thread Magnus Hagander
On Mon, Sep 7, 2020 at 6:34 AM Ian Barwick wrote: > Hi > > On these pages: > >https://www.postgresql.org/docs/current/fdw-callbacks.html >https://www.postgresql.org/docs/current/tablesample-method.html > > we have the phrase: > >"..., which see for additional details." > > which strik

[doc] minor wording improvement in a couple of places

2020-09-06 Thread Ian Barwick
Hi On these pages: https://www.postgresql.org/docs/current/fdw-callbacks.html https://www.postgresql.org/docs/current/tablesample-method.html we have the phrase: "..., which see for additional details." which strikes me as a bit odd. Suggested phrasing: "...; see this file for additi