Re: Improve This Sentence?

2020-04-24 Thread Michael Paquier
On Mon, Apr 13, 2020 at 05:54:26AM -0400, Dave Cramer wrote: > Ironically the first one above is supposed to be providing more clarity if > you can believe: > For additional information on tuning these settings, see Section 29.4. > > Clearly just copying the text from 19.5.2 to 29.4 is an improvem

Re: Documentation: 21.5. Default Roles

2020-04-24 Thread Jonathan S. Katz
On 4/9/20 11:45 PM, Bruce Momjian wrote: > On Thu, Apr 9, 2020 at 08:47:56PM -0400, Jonathan Katz wrote: >> On 4/9/20 4:57 PM, Bruce Momjian wrote: >>> Jonathan, Stephen, with the minor release done, can we focus on adding >>> the URL redirect and completing the patch to rename this feature in the