On Fri, Jun 20, 2025 at 2:21 PM Joshua Drake wrote:
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>> "We advise users who to read this chapter carefully ..." ? botched
>> surgery on this one
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> Not sure what you mean here? I reviewed the source sgml (that I modified):
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> We advise users who to read this chapter carefully because it
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> Overall I'm good with the attempt to trim, and most of the changes, but
> feel it tries to hard and ends up being to "matter-of-fact"; the
> conjunctions that exist make reading a wall of text easier. I agree that
> some of them could be removed as being more judgemental than mechanical.
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On Fri, Jun 20, 2025 at 12:33 PM Joshua Drake wrote:
> To make it more consumable.
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Overall I'm good with the attempt to trim, and most of the changes, but
feel it tries to hard and ends up being to "matter-of-fact"; the
conjunctions that exist make reading a wall of text easier. I agree that
