Reviewer: Xiao Min
Review result: Has Issues
Summary: I've reviewed this document and I believe this document is on the
right track. I have no major concern but several minor ones. Besides, there are
a number of nits and ungrammatical sentences, I'm also not good at this, so
just to name a few.
M
Internet-Draft draft-ietf-pce-pcep-extension-native-ip-33.txt is now
available. It is a work item of the Path Computation Element (PCE) WG of the
IETF.
Title: Path Computation Element Communication Protocol (PCEP) Extensions
for Native IP Networks
Authors: Aijun Wang
Boris Kha
Hi, Mallory:
Thanks for your review and suggestions for the security consideration part of
this document.
I have added the corresponding descriptions for the referred RFC documents and
hope they can aid the reader to deep more thoroughly based on their interested.
I have updated substantial edit
