Re: [Pce] Shepherd Review of draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-policy-cp-14

2024-04-27 Thread Ketan Talaulikar
Hi All, I've come across another "shared" registry between this and another IDR document that also needs some update to this document. Refer https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-idr-sr-policy-safi-03.html#section-6.10 Request authors to please align the IANA section in this document also wi

Re: [Pce] Shepherd Review of draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-policy-cp-14

2024-04-08 Thread Ketan Talaulikar
Hi Dhruv, I've also posted my review of the document from the POV of consistency with SR Policy Arch and BGP SR Policy SAFI documents https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/pce/xExbrHXRsC66fGUdy5wtvQlbXc4/ I hope these help improve the document by providing a better overall context of these very

Re: [Pce] Shepherd Review of draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-policy-cp-14

2024-04-06 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi Mike, Authors, Please make a new version of the I-D where you handle the following items. We can then send the I-D to the IESG. (1) Please handle Ketan's concern and add the IANA note as he suggested - https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/pce/ZaYof63GNYdplFUOLo6G6hJlx3c/ (2) A few comments/q

Re: [Pce] Shepherd Review of draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-policy-cp-14

2024-03-17 Thread Mike Koldychev
Hi Dhruv, I've incorporated your changes and all the other comments that I have received so far. Hopefully I didn't miss anything. Version 15 is uploaded. Thanks a lot for your comments and updates! Thanks, Mike. On Saturday, March 9th, 2024 at 8:23 AM, Dhruv Dhody wrote: > Hi Authors, > >

[Pce] Shepherd Review of draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-policy-cp-14

2024-03-09 Thread Dhruv Dhody
Hi Authors, I have finished the shepherd review of draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-policy-cp-14. Please handle these comments before we ship this I-D to IESG. ## Major - Section 5.6, you need to add update: RFC 8231 in the draft metadata. This should also be captured in the abstract. The prefered