[OPSAWG]Re: Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-11

2024-05-14 Thread Tero Kivinen
mohamed.boucad...@orange.com writes: > > In section 8.3 change > > > > This type MUST be encoded per > >Section 6.1.1 of [RFC7011]. Reduced-Size encoding (Section > > 6.2 of > >[RFC7011]) applies to this data type. > > > > to > > > >

[OPSAWG]Re: Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-11

2024-05-18 Thread Tero Kivinen
Benoit Claise writes: > We could potentially ask the RFC-editors to do this task? Or maybe > they do it automatically? I do not think they do it automatically, and usually it is better to leave that to the experts. Some of the RFC titles are long, and people who are experts on those protocols can

[OPSAWG]Re: Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-attachment-circuit-15

2024-09-03 Thread Tero Kivinen
mohamed.boucad...@orange.com writes: > > 1.1. Scope and Intended Use > > > >Connectivity services are provided by networks to customers > > via > >dedicated terminating points, such as Service Functions (SFs) > >[RFC], Customer Edges (CEs), peer Autonomous System Border > > ... >

[OPSAWG][secdir] Re: [Last-Call] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tls13-18

2025-04-07 Thread Tero Kivinen
Joe Clarke \(jclarke\) writes: > Yeah, this was new to me, too. But when logged into DT, if I go to [My Name] > > My Reviews at the top, I can select a given review and click the correct > review button to change the status and the revision reviewed. We do not usually do that in secdir. The docum

[OPSAWG] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-srv6-srh-08

2023-04-21 Thread Tero Kivinen via Datatracker
Reviewer: Tero Kivinen Review result: Has Issues I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document ed

[OPSAWG] Secdir telechat review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-srv6-srh-09

2023-05-11 Thread Tero Kivinen via Datatracker
Reviewer: Tero Kivinen Review result: Ready I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors a

[OPSAWG]Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-11

2024-05-10 Thread Tero Kivinen via Datatracker
Reviewer: Tero Kivinen Review result: Has Issues I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document ed

[OPSAWG]Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-15

2024-06-13 Thread Tero Kivinen via Datatracker
Reviewer: Tero Kivinen Review result: Has Nits This is the re-review of the document. There are still several places where the draft uses [RFC1234] without giving any indication what document that is, requiring readers to have the mapping from RFC numbers to names. This will cause extra effort

[OPSAWG]Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-attachment-circuit-15

2024-08-15 Thread Tero Kivinen via Datatracker
Reviewer: Tero Kivinen Review result: Has Issues This is YANG model providing configuration and information about Attachment Circuits. The section 5.2.5.5 describes the security parts, but it is mostly content free, I mean I have no idea what it would mean if you say encryption is enabled on L2

[OPSAWG]Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-attachment-circuit-18

2024-12-04 Thread Tero Kivinen via Datatracker
Reviewer: Tero Kivinen Review result: Ready I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors a