[OPSAWG]I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations-17.txt

2024-08-15 Thread internet-drafts
Internet-Draft draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations-17.txt is now available. It is a work item of the Operations and Management Area Working Group (OPSAWG) WG of the IETF. Title: Operational Considerations for Use of DNS in IoT Devices Authors: Michael Richardson Wei Pa

[OPSAWG]Re: process forward for draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations

2024-08-15 Thread Michael Richardson
Mahesh, https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations-16&url2=draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations-17&difftype=--html contains changes to: * remove "geofenced" from the appendix * synchronizes expectation in Introduction for cooperation text in th

[OPSAWG]Re: process forward for draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-iot-dns-considerations

2024-08-15 Thread Mahesh Jethanandani
Hi Michael, Thanks for taking care of the comments from Erik and John. I see that you responded to Orie and Eric’s comments, and since they have not come back, I am going to assume they are ok with the changes you have made. I have asked Joe/Benoit to help me with the document. In the meantime,

[OPSAWG]Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-pcaplinktype-04

2024-08-15 Thread Joel Halpern via Datatracker
Reviewer: Joel Halpern Review result: Almost Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more inf

[OPSAWG]Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-pcaplinktype-04

2024-08-15 Thread Guy Harris
On Aug 15, 2024, at 12:34 PM, Joel Halpern via Datatracker wrote: > Minor issues: >(Unclear if this is Major or Minor): The table layout for the IANA registry >fails to conform to I-D / RFC requirements. Considered as text, it is much >too wide. Considered as HTML, the normal rende

[OPSAWG]Re: IPR POLL: draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tls13

2024-08-15 Thread heasley
> We’re up to WG LC on this draft. We want to reconfirm any known IPR related > to this work: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-tacacs-tls13/ > Are you aware of any IPR that applies to draft identified above? > Please state either: "No, I'm not aware of any IPR that applies to

[OPSAWG]Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-teas-attachment-circuit-15

2024-08-15 Thread Tero Kivinen via Datatracker
Reviewer: Tero Kivinen Review result: Has Issues This is YANG model providing configuration and information about Attachment Circuits. The section 5.2.5.5 describes the security parts, but it is mostly content free, I mean I have no idea what it would mean if you say encryption is enabled on L2,

[OPSAWG]Re: Paul Wouters' Discuss on draft-ietf-opsawg-ipfix-tcpo-v6eh-17: (with DISCUSS)

2024-08-15 Thread Mahesh Jethanandani
Hi Paul, Please let me know if this change addresses your DISCUSS on the document. Thanks. > On Jul 22, 2024, at 3:32 AM, mohamed.boucad...@orange.com wrote: > > Hi Mahesh, all, > > Thanks for sharing this update. > > == > The solution we came up with is for IANA to list the three drafts, R