[OAUTH-WG] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-jwk-thumbprint-uri-01

2022-05-03 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more informati

[OAUTH-WG] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-15

2022-11-17 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For mo

[OAUTH-WG] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-step-up-authn-challenge-12

2023-03-02 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Issues Summary: essentially ready but with issues to consider before being published as a proposed standard RFC. Issues: I expected to find some discussion of considerations of avoiding "step down" given the intuitive appeal to "step up". Can the

[OAUTH-WG] Artart telechat review of draft-ietf-oauth-step-up-authn-challenge-13

2023-03-20 Thread Robert Sparks via Datatracker
Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Issues Summary: essentially ready but with issues to consider before being published as a proposed standard RFC. Thanks for addressing the nit from my previous review. I am not convinced that the document doesn't need more discussion around the p