Re: [OAUTH-WG] AD review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-12

2022-10-27 Thread Justin Richer
ginal Message- >>> From: Justin Richer >>> Sent: Thursday, September 15, 2022 11:20 AM >>> To: Roman Danyliw >>> Cc: oauth@ietf.org >>> Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] AD review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-12 >>> >>> Hi Roman, som

Re: [OAUTH-WG] AD review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-12

2022-10-27 Thread Roman Danyliw
se address this feedback concurrently. > > -Original Message- > > From: Justin Richer > > Sent: Thursday, September 15, 2022 11:20 AM > > To: Roman Danyliw > > Cc: oauth@ietf.org > > Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] AD review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-12 > > &

Re: [OAUTH-WG] AD review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-12

2022-10-24 Thread Justin Richer
;> Cc: oauth@ietf.org<mailto:oauth@ietf.org>; Brian Campbell mailto:bcampb...@pingidentity.com>>; jric...@mit.edu<mailto:jric...@mit.edu> Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] AD review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-12 Hi Roman, thanks for you review. I’m trying to do the next round for the out

Re: [OAUTH-WG] AD review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-12

2022-10-24 Thread Torsten Lodderstedt
>> mailto:bcampb...@pingidentity.com>>; >> jric...@mit.edu <mailto:jric...@mit.edu> >> Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] AD review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-12 >> >> Hi Roman, >> >> thanks for you review. >> >> I’m trying to do the next round fo

Re: [OAUTH-WG] AD review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-12

2022-10-24 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi Torsten! Thanks for the response. More inline ... > -Original Message- > From: Torsten Lodderstedt > Sent: Tuesday, October 18, 2022 9:00 AM > To: Roman Danyliw > Cc: oauth@ietf.org; Brian Campbell ; > jric...@mit.edu > Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] AD review of dr

Re: [OAUTH-WG] AD review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-12

2022-10-19 Thread Brian Campbell
On Fri, Oct 14, 2022 at 10:50 AM Roman Danyliw wrote: > > > > > > > ** Section 11.2 > > > > > > One option would be to have a mechanism allowing the registration of > > > extension modules, each of them responsible for rendering the > > > respective user consent and any transformation neede

Re: [OAUTH-WG] AD review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-12

2022-10-18 Thread Torsten Lodderstedt
Hi Roman, thanks for you review. I’m trying to do the next round for the outstanding issues you raised. > Am 15.09.2022 um 00:30 schrieb Roman Danyliw : > > Hi! > > I performed an AD review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-12. Thanks for this > document. My feedback is as follows: > > ** Secti

Re: [OAUTH-WG] AD review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-12

2022-10-17 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi Justin! https://github.com/oauthstuff/draft-oauth-rar/pull/88 looks good to me. Thanks. Roman From: Justin Richer Sent: Monday, October 17, 2022 4:35 PM To: Roman Danyliw Cc: oauth@ietf.org Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] AD review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-12 Thank you, that’s a much better way to

Re: [OAUTH-WG] AD review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-12

2022-10-17 Thread Justin Richer
etf.org> Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] AD review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-12 Hi Roman, some responses inline. On Sep 14, 2022, at 6:30 PM, Roman Danyliw mailto:r...@cert.org>> wrote: [snip] ** Section 2.2. All data fields are OPTIONAL for use by a given API definition. I don't follow

Re: [OAUTH-WG] AD review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-12

2022-10-14 Thread Roman Danyliw
Looks good to me. Thank you Brian! From: Brian Campbell Sent: Thursday, September 15, 2022 12:50 PM To: Justin Richer Cc: Roman Danyliw ; oauth@ietf.org Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] AD review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-12 Thanks for the review Roman and thanks Justin for the responses. I took the

Re: [OAUTH-WG] AD review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-12

2022-10-14 Thread Roman Danyliw
Hi Justin! > -Original Message- > From: Justin Richer > Sent: Thursday, September 15, 2022 11:20 AM > To: Roman Danyliw > Cc: oauth@ietf.org > Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] AD review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-12 > > Hi Roman, some responses inline. > > > O

Re: [OAUTH-WG] AD review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-12

2022-09-15 Thread Brian Campbell
Thanks for the review Roman and thanks Justin for the responses. I took the liberty of going ahead and making some of the more straightforward changes suggested by the review in the document source https://github.com/oauthstuff/draft-oauth-rar/commit/575f21bf6369c609f673062ec2083215c797b4c2 so as

Re: [OAUTH-WG] AD review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-12

2022-09-15 Thread Justin Richer
Hi Roman, some responses inline. > On Sep 14, 2022, at 6:30 PM, Roman Danyliw wrote: > > Hi! > > I performed an AD review of draft-ietf-oauth-rar-12. Thanks for this > document. My feedback is as follows: > > ** Section 2. Editorial > > This field MUST be compared using an exact byte ma