Re: [OAUTH-WG] Review of draft-ietf-oauth-assertions-03

2012-06-28 Thread Brian Campbell
Hi Hannes, Near the end of §1 of your draft -04 you discuss client authentication with the Resource Server by saying that the client authentication concerns steps (E) and (F) in figure 1. However, my reading of §2.3 of the core OAuth Framework[1] was that only client authentication to the AS was i

Re: [OAUTH-WG] Review of draft-ietf-oauth-assertions-03

2012-06-24 Thread Hannes Tschofenig
Hi Brian, thanks for your response. I have tried to put additional text into version -04 of the draft to address my earlier comments. The most recent version of the updated document is there: https://github.com/hannestschofenig/tschofenig-ids/blob/master/oauth-assertions/draft-ietf-oauth-asser

Re: [OAUTH-WG] Review of draft-ietf-oauth-assertions-03

2012-05-30 Thread Brian Campbell
Thanks for the comments Hannes. I've attempted to answer some of your questions/comments inline below (or at least provide some additional info, context or explanation). On Thu, May 24, 2012 at 12:39 PM, Hannes Tschofenig < hannes.tschofe...@gmx.net> wrote: > Hi Chuck, Mike, Brian, and Yaron, > >

Re: [OAUTH-WG] Review of draft-ietf-oauth-assertions-03

2012-05-29 Thread Chuck Mortimore
Just catching up here - thanks for the comments Hannes. Did you merge these in by yourself? -cmort On May 24, 2012, at 11:39 AM, Hannes Tschofenig wrote: > Hi Chuck, Mike, Brian, and Yaron, > > I reviewed the document as part of my shepherding role and I believe there is > still room for im

[OAUTH-WG] Review of draft-ietf-oauth-assertions-03

2012-05-24 Thread Hannes Tschofenig
Hi Chuck, Mike, Brian, and Yaron, I reviewed the document as part of my shepherding role and I believe there is still room for improvement with the document. I think the document suffers from the problem that you essentially want to cover every possible use case in a single document. So, let me