Re: [OAUTH-WG] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-device-flow-10

2018-08-02 Thread William Denniss
Qin, Thank you for your valuable feedback. Version 12 incorporates some of your feedback. Replies inline: On Tue, Jun 12, 2018 at 4:25 AM, Qin Wu wrote: > Reviewer: Qin Wu > Review result: Ready > > I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate¡¯s > ongoing > effort to re

[OAUTH-WG] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-oauth-device-flow-10

2018-06-12 Thread Qin Wu
Reviewer: Qin Wu Review result: Ready I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate¡¯s ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that