[OAUTH-WG] Comments on Assertions draft 00 by Yaron Goland

2011-08-10 Thread Mike Jones
Author List: Change "MSFT" to "Microsoft" (twice). Author List: Change "Yaron Goland" to "Yaron Y. Goland". 2. Overview: Change "privliged" to "privileged". 2. Overview: Change "messsage" to "message". 3. Authentication vs. Authorization: Add a period after "vs" so the title becomes "A

[OAUTH-WG] Last call comments on bearer draft 08 from Yaron Goland

2011-08-10 Thread Mike Jones
1. Introduction: Adding the word "directly" after "rather than using the resource owner's credentials". 1.3. Overview: Comment on first sentence: "OAuth also supports having a client directly provide its own credentials to get an access token. It would seem useful to refer to this as well l