Sure,
Just let me know when you're finished with a section or part of a
section and I'll have a look (just remember to state where the revisions
begin and end, so as to avoid duplicate work).
Thanks,
Dave
Valentin Villenave wrote:
2008/8/18 David Stocker <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>:
Good job.
2008/8/18 David Stocker <[EMAIL PROTECTED]>:
> Good job. I'm copying this to the list simply to let folks know I'm happy to
> look over English documentation for correct grammar. If anyone feels that he
> needs another pair of eyes to look over revisions to the documentation, then
> please feel fr
Fransisco,
It looks good (your English is better than my Spanish!). I have only a
few suggestions:
1. In the last sentence of the paragraph following the first music
example, change "voices move to avoid collisions." to "voices are
automatically moved to avoid collisions."
2. In