[IPsec] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-multi-sa-performance-06

2024-04-18 Thread Rich Salz via Datatracker
Reviewer: Rich Salz Review result: Ready I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs

[IPsec] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-rename-esn-02

2025-01-06 Thread Rich Salz via Datatracker
Reviewer: Rich Salz Review result: Ready I'm the ARTART reviewer for this document. The kinds of things this directorate looks for are described at https://wiki.ietf.org/group/art/TypicalARTAreaIssues I found this wording initially confusing: "the sender in accordance with AH ([RFC4302] Section 3