[IPsec] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-qr-alt-07

2025-04-01 Thread Luis Contreras via Datatracker
Reviewer: Luis Contreras Review result: Has Nits I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational Directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written to improve the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not

[IPsec] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-qr-alt-07

2025-04-01 Thread Carl Wallace via Datatracker
Reviewer: Carl Wallace Review result: Ready The draft is a well-written and is ready as-is. Two minor nits. In the intro, change "by means of Post-Quantum Preshared Key" to "by means of a Post-Quantum Preshared Key." For table 1, I think it'd be helpful to define what '*' means. I see in some ref