[IPsec] Re: AD comments on draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikeve-qr-alt

2025-03-06 Thread Panwei (William)
(as the shepherd of this document) Thank you Deb for your review. I agree with all these comments. One suggestion for this one: > Appendix A, last paragraph: 'PPK stuff', maybe 'PPK messages'? I wonder if “messages” is the correct word as it means the whole request or response packet to me. May

[IPsec] AD comments on draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikeve-qr-alt

2025-03-06 Thread Deb Cooley
Thanks to Valery for writing this draft, apologies for the delay. I was hoping to beat the I-D submission cutoff, but I didn't make it. I did spend some time mapping out the differences in how the key development works in all three versions: RFC 7296, RFC8784 and this draft. They are related, b