[IPsec] Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-rename-esn-03.txt

2025-01-16 Thread Valery Smyslov
Hi, this version addresses comments received during IETF LC. In particular, the new name for transform type 5 is changed from (grammatically incorrect) "Sequence Numbers Properties (SNP)" to just "Sequence Numbers (SN)". Regards, Valery. > Internet-Draft draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-rename-esn-03.tx

[IPsec] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipsecme-g-ikev2-20.txt

2025-01-16 Thread internet-drafts
Internet-Draft draft-ietf-ipsecme-g-ikev2-20.txt is now available. It is a work item of the IP Security Maintenance and Extensions (IPSECME) WG of the IETF. Title: Group Key Management using IKEv2 Authors: Valery Smyslov Brian Weis Name:draft-ietf-ipsecme-g-ikev2-20.txt

[IPsec] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-rename-esn-03.txt

2025-01-16 Thread internet-drafts
Internet-Draft draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-rename-esn-03.txt is now available. It is a work item of the IP Security Maintenance and Extensions (IPSECME) WG of the IETF. Title: Renaming Extended Sequence Number (ESN) Transform Type in the Internet Key Exchange Protocol Version 2 (IKEv2) Autho

[IPsec] Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipsecme-g-ikev2-20.txt

2025-01-16 Thread Valery Smyslov
Hi, this version aligns this draft with draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-rename-esn-03 (the new name of transform type 5). Regards, Valery. > Internet-Draft draft-ietf-ipsecme-g-ikev2-20.txt is now available. It is a > work item of > the IP Security Maintenance and Extensions (IPSECME) WG of the IETF.

[IPsec] Re: WGLC for draft-ietf-ipsecme-diet-esp

2025-01-16 Thread Valery Smyslov
Hi, I reviewed draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-diet-esp. Summary: I don't think that the document is ready. There are many issues (or various severity) that need to be fixed. Issues. 1. Section 4.3. The compression of the Inner IP Packet is based on the attributes that are derived from the nego

[IPsec] Re: WGLC for draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-diet-esp-extension

2025-01-16 Thread Valery Smyslov
Hi, I reviewed draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-diet-esp-extension. Summary: I don't think that the document is ready. With the current text I have trouble reading it as implementer. Issues: 1. Section 2. Certain AfRG have already been established during the SA negotiation process through IKEv2.

[IPsec] Re: WGLC for draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-diet-esp-extension

2025-01-16 Thread Daniel Migault
Hi Valery, Thanks for your review. We will promptly address your comment and update the draft. Please let me respond to your questions/reviews below. Yours, Daniel On 2025-01-16 08:11, Valery Smyslov wrote: Hi, I reviewed draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-diet-esp-extension. Summary: I don't think