Hi Robert,
thank you for your review. Please, see inline.
> Reviewer: Robert Sparks
> Review result: Ready with Nits
>
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review
> Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the
> IETF Chair. Pleas
Please, see inline as well (and I deleted parts where we are in agreement).
> Small touches like this are an improvement. Please skim through all the bare
> SHOULDs (and SHOULD NOTs) to see if something similar should be said.
I'll try to do my best.
> >> 7th paragraph of 2.3.3 fails to parse at
also inline.
On 12/9/24 7:34 AM, Valery Smyslov wrote:
Hi Robert,
thank you for your review. Please, see inline.
Reviewer: Robert Sparks
Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review
Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being p
