I already send some comments, but now when I am checking the modified
draft I found some other nits, that might need to be fixed at some
point (I will still put the document forward today, authors can fix
those later when they have time, or when they have other comments
during the IETF last call et
Tero Kivinen has requested publication of draft-ietf-ipsecme-labeled-ipsec-09
as Proposed Standard on behalf of the IPSECME working group.
Please verify the document's state at
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ipsecme-labeled-ipsec/
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Changed milestone "The security labels support for IKEv2 to IESG", resolved
as "Done".
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On Thu, 9 Feb 2023, Tero Kivinen wrote:
which do not match. I suggest just removing the section 3 text, as
this is already explained in the section 2.2. Or perhaps moving the
text from section 2.2 to section 3, replacing that old section 3
paragraph with the text moved from section 2.2.
I did