[IPsec] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-rfc8229bis-06

2022-05-28 Thread Christian Huitema via Datatracker
Reviewer: Christian Huitema Review result: Has Nits I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors a

[IPsec] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs-12

2022-05-28 Thread Peter Yee via Datatracker
Reviewer: Peter Yee Review result: Ready with Issues I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more i