Re: [IPsec] WG adoption call for draft-fedyk-ipsecme-yang-iptfs

2021-02-03 Thread Sean Turner
Since we’re yang-ing all the things - sure let’s adopt it. spt > On Jan 24, 2021, at 20:59, Tero Kivinen wrote: > > This is the start of 3 week WG adoption call for this document, ending > 2021-02-15. Please send your reply about whether you support adopting > this document as WG document or no

Re: [IPsec] WGLC for draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs

2021-02-03 Thread Sean Turner
Hi! I mostly just have nits, but there are a couple of questions interspersed below. s1, para 1: s/While one may directly obscure the data through the use of/While directly obscuring the data with s1, para 1: s/it’s/its s1, para 3: s/IP-TFS/IP-TFS (IP Traffic Flow Security) s1, last para: s/I