Re: [IPsec] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-auth-announce-06

2024-04-02 Thread Reese Enghardt
Hi Valery, Thank you for the response and updates. Please see inline: On 4/1/24 06:08, Valery Smyslov wrote: Abstract: As a non-expert reader, the following phrases appear to contradict each other: "indicate the list of supported authentication methods" sounds like different algorithms, "conf

Re: [IPsec] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-auth-announce-06

2024-04-02 Thread Paul Wouters
I can live with that.PaulSent using a virtual keyboard on a phoneOn Apr 2, 2024, at 03:10, Valery Smyslov wrote:Hi Paul, On Mon, Apr 1, 2024 at 9:08 AM Valery Smyslov wrote: I've added the following sentence to the Introduction:   Since IKEv2 doesn't allow to use multiple   authen

Re: [IPsec] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-auth-announce-06

2024-04-02 Thread Valery Smyslov
Hi Paul, On Mon, Apr 1, 2024 at 9:08 AM Valery Smyslov < s...@elvis.ru> wrote: I've added the following sentence to the Introduction: Since IKEv2 doesn't allow to use multiple authentication methods and doesn't provide means for peers to indicate to the oth

Re: [IPsec] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-auth-announce-06

2024-04-01 Thread Paul Wouters
On Mon, Apr 1, 2024 at 9:08 AM Valery Smyslov wrote: I've added the following sentence to the Introduction: > >Since IKEv2 doesn't allow to use multiple >authentication methods and doesn't provide means for peers to >indicate to the other side which authentication methods they support

Re: [IPsec] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-auth-announce-06

2024-04-01 Thread Valery Smyslov
Hi Reese, thank you for your review. Please see inline. > Reviewer: Reese Enghardt > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the > IETF Chair. Please