Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-federated-fs-protocol-14

2012-12-03 Thread Peter Yee
-nfsv4-federated-fs-protocol-14 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: Nov-29-2012 IETF LC End Date: Oct-22-2012 IESG Telechat date: Nov-29-2012 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has a nit that should be fixed before publication. [Ready with nits.] All other corrections from the -13

Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-avt-rtp-evrc-nw-08

2012-12-12 Thread Peter Yee
viewer: Peter Yee Review Date: Dec-11-2012 IETF LC End Date: Dec-11-2012 IESG Telechat date: Unknown Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has a few nits that should be fixed before publication. [Ready with nits.] This Standards Track draft specifies RTP payload formats for us

Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-avt-rtp-evrc-nw-0

2012-12-21 Thread Peter Yee
p-evrc-nw-09 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: Dec-19-2012 IETF LC End Date: Dec-11-2012 IESG Telechat date: Dec-20-2012 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC.

Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-6man-udpchecksums-06

2012-12-27 Thread Peter Yee
f-6man-udpchecksums-06 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: Dec-25-2012 IETF LC End Date: Dec-25-2012 IESG Telechat date: Unknown Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. [Ready with nits.] This document provides an update to 2460 to allow t

Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-roll-security-threats-00

2013-01-22 Thread Peter Yee
y late.) Document: draft-ietf-roll-security-threats-00 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: Jan-22-2012 IETF LC End Date: Jan-21-2012 IESG Telechat date: Unknown Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. [Ready with nits.] This document an

RE: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-6man-udpchecksums-06

2013-01-22 Thread Peter Yee
Magnus, Looks good to me. My summary is now "Ready for publication". Kind regards, -Peter -Original Message- From: Magnus Westerlund [mailto:magnus.westerl...@ericsson.com] Sent: Thursday, January 17, 2013 2:59 AM To: Peter Yee Cc:

Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-intarea-nat-reveal-analysis-05

2013-03-09 Thread Peter Yee
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-ietf-intarea-nat-reveal-analysis-05 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: Mar-08-2013 IETF LC End Date: Mar-08-201

Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-intarea-nat-reveal-analysis-06

2013-04-05 Thread Peter Yee
ea-nat-reveal-analysis-06 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: Apr-5-2013 IETF LC End Date: Mar-8-2013 IESG Telechat date: Apr-11-2013 This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. [Ready with nits] It addresses most of the issues raised in my rev

Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-interworking-07

2013-04-09 Thread Peter Yee
ing-07 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: Apr-08-2013 IETF LC End Date: Apr-08-2013 IESG Telechat date: Unknown Summary: This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the review. [Ready with issues] This is a well-written draft describing how Universal Plug-and-Play Internet G

RE: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-interworking-07

2013-04-09 Thread Peter Yee
Med, Thanks for the swift response to my review. See my one reply inline. Kind regards, -Peter >>Page 13, 1st paragraph, 3rd sentence: what's meant here is if any PCP >>error other than a short-lifetime error, or in the case of a failed >>resend, any PCP

RE: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-interworking-07

2013-04-10 Thread Peter Yee
Med, That looks great. Thanks for accommodating my concern. Kind regards, -Peter -Original Message- From: mohamed.boucad...@orange.com [mailto:mohamed.boucad...@orange.com] Sent: Wednesday, April 10, 2013 12:49 AM To: Peter Yee

Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-interworking-07

2013-04-23 Thread Peter Yee
np-igd-interworking-08 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: Apr-23-2013 IETF LC End Date: Apr-08-2013 IESG Telechat date: Apr-25-2013 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC. [Ready] This is a well-written draft describing how Universal Plug-and-Play Internet Gateway D

RE: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-interworking-07

2013-04-23 Thread Peter Yee
Grrr, typo in the subject line. That should be draft version -08, as correctly referenced below. Sigh. -Peter -Original Message- From: gen-art-boun...@ietf.org [mailto:gen-art-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Peter Yee Sent: Tuesday, April 23, 2013 10:57 PM To: draft-ietf

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-netmod-ip-cfg-09

2013-05-03 Thread Peter Yee
viewer: Peter Yee Review Date: May-03-2013 IETF LC End Date: May-03-2013 IESG Telechat date: May-16-2013 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. [Ready with nits] The abstract says it pretty well: This do

Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-netmod-ip-cfg-09

2013-05-15 Thread Peter Yee
pdated since my Last Call review, so the information below remains unchanged. Document: draft-ietf-netmod-ip-cfg-09 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: May-03-2013 IETF LC End Date: May-03-2013 IESG Telechat date: May-16-2013 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as a Standards Track RF

RE: Call for Review of draft-iab-rfc4441rev-04.txt, "The IEEE 802 / IETF Relationship"

2013-06-06 Thread Peter Yee
>In Section 3.3.1.5: > > "IEEE 802 standards, once approved, are published and made available >for sale." > >This could be a cultural difference. RFC 6852 glosses over that (see "Standards specifications are made accessible to all for implementation and deployment.") IEEE 802 standards are

Gen-ART LC review of draft-jabley-dnsext-eui48-eui64-rrtypes-04

2013-06-09 Thread Peter Yee
rtypes-04 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: June-09-2013 IETF LC End Date: June-17-2013 IESG Telechat date: Unknown Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as an Informational RFC, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. [Ready with nits] This draft defines DNS Resources

Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-mile-template-04

2012-05-29 Thread Peter Yee
viewer: Peter Yee Review Date: 26-May-2012 IETF LC End Date: 28-May-2012 IESG Telechat date: 07-June-2012 Summary: This draft gives guidance on creating extensions to IODEF (RFC 5070). The document is ready for publication as an informational RFC. Major Issues: None Minor Issues: None Nits/edi

Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-value-added-octets-03

2012-06-29 Thread Peter Yee
octets-03 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: 28-June-2012 IETF LC End Date: 28-June-2012 IESG Telechat date: Pending Summary: This draft describes an extension to the TWAMP protocol for handling packet "trains" which are used to quantify network capacity metrics. The document is ready fo

Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-dps-framework-08

2012-07-16 Thread Peter Yee
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-dps-framework-08 Reviewer: Pet

Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ccamp-assoc-ext-04

2012-09-04 Thread Peter Yee
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-assoc-ext-04 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: Aug-28-2012 IETF LC End Date: Aug-29-2012 IESG Telechat dat

Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ccamp-assoc-ext-05

2012-09-07 Thread Peter Yee
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-assoc-ext-05 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: Sep-06-2012 IETF LC End Date: Aug-29-2012 IESG Telechat dat

Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-6man-udpchecksums-04

2012-10-03 Thread Peter Yee
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-ietf-6man-udpchecksums-04 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: Sep-30-2012 IETF LC End Date: Oct-2-2012 IESG Telechat dat

Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-federated-fs-protocol-13

2012-10-22 Thread Peter Yee
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-ietf-nfsv4-federated-fs-protocol-13 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: Oct-19-2012 IETF LC End Date: Oct-22-201

Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-federated-fs-protocol-13

2012-10-22 Thread Peter Yee
Chuck, Ranges include the 0,255 that appears commonly in the document in attribute definitions along with one case of -2147483648,2147483647. Kind regards, -Peter On 10/21/12 3:27 PM, "Chuck Lever" wrote: > >On Oct 21, 2012, at 5:39 PM, Peter Ye

Re: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-federated-fs-protocol-13

2012-10-23 Thread Peter Yee
Chuck, I'll cheerfully settle for the status quo. Please ignore that comment. Thanks. -Peter On Oct 22, 2012, at 4:10 PM, Chuck Lever wrote: > > On Oct 21, 2012, at 11:35 PM, Peter Yee wrote: > >> Chuck, >>Ranges incl

Gen-ART LC review of draft-jabley-dnsext-eui48-eui64-rrtypes-05

2013-07-07 Thread Peter Yee
rtypes-05 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: July-07-2013 IETF LC End Date: July-17-2013 IESG Telechat date: August-15-2013 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as an Informational RFC, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. [Ready with nits] This draft defines DNS Res

Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-appsawg-rfc5451bis-09

2013-07-07 Thread Peter Yee
viewer: Peter Yee Review Date: July-01-2013 IETF LC End Date: June-27-2013 IESG Telechat date: July-11-2013 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. [Ready with nits] This draft defines a message head

RE: Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-appsawg-rfc5451bis-09

2013-07-08 Thread Peter Yee
Murray, Quick response! My replies are found below. Thanks. -Peter From: Murray S. Kucherawy [mailto:superu...@gmail.com] Sent: Monday, July 08, 2013 12:13 AM To: Peter Yee Cc: draft-ietf-appsawg-rfc5451bis

Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-geopriv-res-gw-lis-discovery-05

2013-07-31 Thread Peter Yee
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-ietf-geopriv-res-gw-lis-discovery-05 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: Jul-31-2013 IETF LC End Date: Jul-31-201

Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-jabley-dnsext-eui48-eui64-rrtypes-05

2013-08-10 Thread Peter Yee
-eui48-eui64-rrtypes-05 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: July-07-2013 IETF LC End Date: July-17-2013 IESG Telechat date: August-15-2013 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication as an Informational RFC, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. [Ready with nits] This rev

Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-repute-media-type-10

2013-08-29 Thread Peter Yee
viewer: Peter Yee Review Date: August-27-2013 IETF LC End Date: August-29-2013 IESG Telechat date: September-12-2013 Summary: This draft is on the right track but has open issues, described in the review. [Ready with minor issues.] This draft directs IANA to register an application/reputon+json

RE: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-repute-media-type-10

2013-09-07 Thread Peter Yee
Thanks, Murray. The updates look good to me. -Peter From: Murray S. Kucherawy [mailto:superu...@gmail.com] Sent: Saturday, September 07, 2013 12:56 AM To: Peter Yee Cc: draft-ietf-repute-media-type@tools.ietf.org; General Area Review Team; ietf Subject

Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-repute-media-type-12

2013-09-07 Thread Peter Yee
-media-type-12 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: September-7-2013 IETF LC End Date: August-29-2013 IESG Telechat date: September-12-2013 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC. [Ready.] This draft directs IANA to register an application/reputon+json media type. I