RE: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-interworking-07

2013-04-23 Thread Peter Yee
-pcp-upnp-igd-interworking@tools.ietf.org Cc: gen-...@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-interworking-07 I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/

Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-interworking-07

2013-04-23 Thread Peter Yee
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-in

RE: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-interworking-07

2013-04-11 Thread mohamed.boucadair
 : mercredi 10 avril 2013 18:47 >À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed OLNC/OLN; draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd- >interworking@tools.ietf.org >Cc : gen-...@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org >Objet : RE: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-interworking-07 > >Med, > > That looks great

RE: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-interworking-07

2013-04-10 Thread Peter Yee
; draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-interworking@tools.ietf.org Cc: gen-...@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org Subject: RE: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-interworking-07 Dear Peter, I changed the text as follows: OLD: If the requested external port is not available, the PCP server will send a

RE: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-interworking-07

2013-04-10 Thread mohamed.boucadair
s.ietf.org >Cc : gen-...@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org >Objet : RE: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-interworking-07 > >Med, > Thanks for the swift response to my review. See my one reply >inline. > > Kind regards, > -Peter > >>

RE: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-interworking-07

2013-04-09 Thread Peter Yee
Med, Thanks for the swift response to my review. See my one reply inline. Kind regards, -Peter >>Page 13, 1st paragraph, 3rd sentence: what's meant here is if any PCP >>error other than a short-lifetime error, or in the case of a failed >>resend, any PCP

RE: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-interworking-07

2013-04-09 Thread mohamed.boucadair
;Objet : Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-interworking-07 > >I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on >Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at ><http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> > >Please resolve these comments along wit

Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-interworking-07

2013-04-09 Thread Peter Yee
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-interworking-07 R