Alex Sassmannshausen skribis:
> * dmd.texi (Introduction): Rewrite for style and clarity.
Pushed, thanks!
Please add a copyright line for yourself (assuming you’re the copyright
holder) in dmd.texi in the next commit.
Ludo’.
* dmd.texi (Introduction): Rewrite for style and clarity.
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Alex Sassmannshausen skribis:
> * dmd.texi (Introduction): Rewrite for style and clarity.
Overall looks good to me!
A few comments below:
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> @@ -78,24 +78,28 @@ the GNU system.
>
> @cindex service manager
> This manual documents the @dfn{dmd} service manage
* dmd.texi (Introduction): Rewrite for style and clarity.
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dmd.texi | 52
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